Just recently I came across something I wrote a year or so ago. It is not finished, but I am wondering if I should maybe continue to work with it. I'd like some feedback
It started because of a picture my friend shared with me. I do not know the origins of the photo... but I hope to find out someday. Anyways, this is what I had written:
"I lay in a golden hue of soft petals and grass.
It surrounds me like a gold sea, engulfing me in all its brightness.
The yellow color reaches the sky, slowing morphing to orange and pink.
As my eye travels farther up to the stars, the sky turns red, dark.
Streaks of purple and black mix in with the deathly color red and it is beautiful…
I can see the stars shining through the blackness that tops off the sky.
The moon can be seen, and the oak tree's branches reach up towards the heavens.
The birds soar.
They fly in a cluster towards the darkness, the unknown."
So, what do you think?
September 28th, 2012
Since posting this journal, I have completed this piece and have posted it here on Deviant Art. If you would like to see how the finished product turned out, follow the link
ecamouse37.deviantart.com/art/… Also, thanks for reading ^.^